What never works in making you feel better?
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When I feel bad, down, sad or frustrated, I often think about drinking. However, drinking won’t help at all to alleviate such feelings. Drinking actually makes the situation worse and might lead to further ruin your body and soul. When you get drunk, you can forget about the issue that’s bothering you temporarily, however, when you wake up the next morning, the problem will still remain unsolved while you neither have energy nor lucid enough to face and cope with the situation. Eating sweat food like ice-cream or chocolate might be helpful for relatively light problems, however, it won’t work when I have a serious issue. When we feel down, it is often the cases that we focus too much on ourselves. We become self-centered and overly focused on our own problems until we realize something very important. Try to make someone’d day. In order to get out of the blue, think about others who suffer more and give them a massive and genuine compliment. We are not alone. Enduring is winning.
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Good afternoon Sir [이름]!
I am so happy that the week is almost over. Hihihi. ^^
How about you? How do you feel?
A lot of people think about drinking when they feel down.But alcoholic beverage is also a downer.
When we feel down, we should think positively and make things work. I totally agree with your ideas. Thanks for another magnificent composition.
See you.Teacher Nina
When I feel bad, down, sad or frustrated, I often think about drinking.
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However, drinking won’t help at all to alleviate such feelings.
>> correct
Drinking actually makes the situation worse and might lead to further ruin your body and soul.
>> correct
When you get drunk, you can forget about the issue that’s bothering you temporarily, however, when you wake up the next morning, the problem will still remain unsolved while you neither have energy nor lucid enough to face and cope with the situation.
>> correct
Eating sweat food like ice-cream or chocolate might be helpful for relatively light problems, however, it won’t work when I have a serious issue.
>> correct
When we feel down, it is often the cases that we focus too much on ourselves.
>> correct
We become self-centered and overly focused on our own problems until we realize something very important.
>> correct
Try to make someone’d day.
>> correct
In order to get out of the blue, think about others who suffer more and give them a massive and genuine compliment.
>> correct
We are not alone.
>> correct
Enduring is winning.
>> correct
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