What new activity would you like to try doing in your free time?
학생이 쓴 원문
If i have a long free time, I want to go backpacking. But If i have a short free time, I will watch movie and drink a beer and then sleep.
강사 첨삭
Good day. Kevin!
I like the idea of planning things especially if you have a long weekend. Don\'t forget to create memories each time you have a chance to enjoy life!
Have a happy Lunar celebration!
T. Aki~
If i have a long free time, I want to go backpacking. But If i have a short free time, I will watch movie and drink a beer and then sleep.
>>> If I have a long free time, I want to go backpacking. But If I have a short free time, I will watch a movie, drink a bottle of beer and then sleep.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.