What new activity would you like to try doing in your free time? Share your ideas in writing
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What new activity would you like to try doing in your free time? Share your ideas in writing
I tried to skateboard and i trying now too
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Hello [이름] ho. :)
I didn\'t know you also like skateboarding. You really are an amazing kid. :) You have a lot of sports and your also good with computers. I bet you also excel in school. :) I would like to hear more about skateboarding from you. Tell me more about what made you like skateboardning and when did you start. That would be nice to hear. :)
For your homework, you again forgot to place a punctuation mark. So everytime you make a sentence, you have to place a punctuation mark so that the person who is going to read your sentence will now if it is a statement, a question or a declaration. A punctuation mark is an important part of a sentence.
Rest well tonight my dear.
I\'ll talk with you tomorrow. (^.^)
Good night. ^^
T. Tanya ^_^
What new activity would you like to try doing in your free time? Share your ideas in writingI tried to skateboard and i trying now too
>> I tried skate boarding and I\'m doing it now.
>> OR: I tried skateboarding and I\'m currently doing it now.
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