What new activity would you like to try doing in your free time?

2019-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I am running a blog about home appliance. I often write article reviewing item which i purchase. Now, I have a plan to open new category on my blog. Whenever making a new program, I would like to write article for introducing my program. If many people visit my blog to read article, I will begin to teach programing through online as well. I hope that my blog prosper more than before. I think that It could be a new route for increasing my income. Even though fail to gather people, My blog will give me various fun.

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- Teacher Tricia


I am running a blog about home appliance.

>> I am running a blog about home appliances.


I often write article reviewing item which i purchase.

>> I often write article reviews on each item I purchased.


Now, I have a plan to open new category on my blog.

>> Now, I am planning to open a new category on my blog.


Whenever making a new program, I would like to write article for introducing my program.

>> Whenever I am making a new program, I would like to write an article for introducing my program.


If many people visit my blog to read article, I will begin to teach programing through online as well.

>> If many people will visit my blog to read my articles, I will begin to teach about programing through online as well.


I hope that my blog prosper more than before.

>> I hope that my blog will prosper more than before.


I think that It could be a new route for increasing my income.

>> CORRECT!


Even though fail to gather people, My blog will give me various fun.

>> Even though I fail to gather people, my blog will give me various fun.

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