What new activity would you like to try doing in your free time?
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I am running a blog about home appliance.
>> I am running a blog about home appliances.
I often write article reviewing item which i purchase.
>> I often write article reviews on each item I purchased.
Now, I have a plan to open new category on my blog.
>> Now, I am planning to open a new category on my blog.
Whenever making a new program, I would like to write article for introducing my program.
>> Whenever I am making a new program, I would like to write an article for introducing my program.
If many people visit my blog to read article, I will begin to teach programing through online as well.
>> If many people will visit my blog to read my articles, I will begin to teach about programing through online as well.
I hope that my blog prosper more than before.
>> I hope that my blog will prosper more than before.
I think that It could be a new route for increasing my income.
>> CORRECT!
Even though fail to gather people, My blog will give me various fun.
>> Even though I fail to gather people, my blog will give me various fun.
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