What new activity would you like to try doing in your free time? Do people\'s leisure time activitie
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I would like to learn how to paint.
When I was a student, I got low grades at art classes so I though I was not good at painting so just give up it.
But apart from the grades, if I learn how to painting slowly and for fun, I think I could do better.
And as we get older, because we can earn money we tend to try to experience and learn various things to find our interests.
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I would like to learn how to paint.
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When I was a student, I got low grades at art classes so I though I was not good at painting so just give up it.
>>> When I was a student, I got low grades in art classes so I thought I was not good at painting so I just gave it up.
But apart from the grades, if I learn how to painting slowly and for fun, I think I could do better.
>>> But apart from the grades, if I learn how to paint slowly while having fun, I think I could do better.
And as we get older, because we can earn money we tend to try to experience and learn various things to find our interests.
>>> CORRECT =)
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