What new features would you like to see on social networking sites?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think they should not upgrade anymore.
I am satisfied with the current features of social media.
Also, I am worried about negative effects when they develop new features.
Especially, the identity theft problem will be increased by improving social networking sites.
That\'s why I disagree with enhancing social media.
강사 첨삭
Hello Chloe! Thank you for this. Come to think of it, you do have a point. We\'ll see for sure.
- T. Beth
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I think they should not upgrade anymore.>>> correct
I am satisfied with the current features of social media.
I am satisfied with the current features of social media.
>>> correct
Also, I am worried about negative effects when they develop new features.
Also, I am worried about negative effects when they develop new features.
>>> Also, I am worried about the negative effects when they develop new features.
Especially, the identity theft problem will be increased by improving social networking sites.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Especially, identity theft problem will increase though the improvement of social networking sites.
That\'s why I disagree with enhancing social media.
That\'s why I disagree with enhancing social media.
>>> correct
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