What new hobby would you like to learn?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to learn sport anything. Because I move my body for my health.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Na [이름]! That’s wonderful! It’s great that you want to stay active and take care of your health. Learning any sport will not only help you move your body but also make exercising fun.
~T. Jenna
I want to learn sport anything.
>>I want to learn any sport.
Because I move my body for my health.
>>This is because I want to move my body for my health.
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I’m interested in taking up a sport as a new hobby because it helps me stay active, stay fit, and maintain my health.
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