What new holidays are needed in your country?

I definitely agree with your statement, [이름] [이름]. 

Korea has been so competitive in all things to the point where people are not able to care for themselves. 

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If we can make laws, we should make “We deny to Too much less holidays than last year” Law

>> If we can make laws, we will create a \"We deny too less holidays than last year\" law.
 Because some straight holidays too much short, if that are between to weekend So busy worker who haven\\\'t any time they definitely not gonna enjoy plenty of time

>> Because some of the continuous holidays are too short, if those are between weekends, busy workers who doesn\'t have enough time. They definitely won\'t enjoy most of the time.
 So this purpose of law is government consider socially disadvantaged class.

>> So with this law, the government is considering the socially disadvantage class.
 Those people really need welfare and holiday is easiest way those people provide to welfare.

>> Those people really needs welfare and a holiday is the easiest way to provide those people with welfare.
 Also holiday is nobody hate and have a break time for work is very important things

>> Also, nobody hates the holidays. A break from work is very important.
 Everyone want to be more fester also my country too

>> Everyone wants to be faster, also in my country.
 Maybe korean is most impatient people in the whole world

>> Maybe Koreans are the most impatient people in the world.
 They always saying fast! fast! more fast! and never stop like someone chasing them!

>> They\'re always saying, \"Fast, fast, faster!\", they never stop, it\'s as if someone is chasing them!
 But Creative idea, find the route, efficient project, all those thing generated in rest

>> But creative ideas, finding the route, efficient projects, all those things are generated with rest.
 To be possible we can make, we must be stop

>> For things to be possible, we must be stopped.
 I believe we can more better than before if we have a break

>> I believe we can be better than before if we have a break.
 Just we take a breath and have a wide sight

>> We just take a breath and have a wide sight.