What new innovations have you noticed nowadays?
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow, it\'s an interesting thing. The technology has been developed fast, so I can see innovative things easily. For example automatic driving, electric car and missile. These days, I heared an information about missile of North Korea. North Korea has test-fired short-range missiles many times. Also, I felt that it\'s a innovation thing to me.
강사 첨삭
Try to study these corrections carefully, Elic. I provided alternative sentences for you to practice and if you have the time, try to write them down, it\'s easier to remember things if you write them, trust me. Thank you for your efforts!
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>> Correct.
The technology has been developed fast, so I can see innovative things easily.
>> Technology has been developing fast and seeing innovative things is easy.
For example automatic driving, electric car and missile.
>> Correct. (remember correct punctuation) For example, automatic driving, electric cars, and missiles.
These days, I heared an information about missile of North Korea.
>> Recently, I heard some information about the missiles in North Korea.
North Korea has test-fired short-range missiles many times.
>> North Korea had test-fired short-range missiles for several times.
Also, I felt that it\'s a innovation thing to me.
>> I also feel that it\'s an innovative thing.
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