What news do you need every day? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I need a social news so that I can know what’s happened in our society every day and handle the crisis around me.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Judy!
Social news can be those that affect the society. Hence, I agree that it is paramount for us to know the news about social issues to be able to respond properly.
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See you again in class soon!
-T. Donna~
>> I need social news so that I can know what happens in our society every day and handle the crisis around me.
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