What offers or requests shouldn’t you refuse?

2022-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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If someone offer something in a warmheartedness mind, I can\'t refuse. Sincere behavior make me warm. I have weakness about that part. I sympathy well with other people\'s feeling. Also someone get a tricky situation so they need some help, I shouln\'t refuse their requests. I usually try to help them when someone offers to me. Next time they might hlep me in a opposite situation.

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~T. Maine

If someone offer something in a warmheartedness mind, I can\'t refuse.
>> If someone offers something with a warm heart and mind, I can\'t refuse it. 
Sincere behavior make me warm. 
>>Sincere behavior makes me feel warm. 
I have weakness about that part.
>> I have a weakness about that part. 
>>OR: That is my weakness. 
I sympathy well with other people\'s feeling.
>>I sympathize well with other people\'s feelings. 
Also someone get a tricky situation so they need some help, I shouln\'t refuse their requests.
>> Also someone gets in a tricky situation so they need some help.  I cannot refuse their requests.
I usually try to help them when someone offers to me.
>>I usually try to help them when someone asks me to. 
Next time they might hlep me in a opposite situation.
>> Next time, they might also help me in the opposite situation. 

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