What one thing can transform the business to a higher level?, previous class review

2022-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Erin

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Thinking and attitude are the most important thing when we jump to higher business level. I have thought that the behaviors are coming from thinking. So, thinking is the most important in our life even not the business. I\'m always trying to think positively. -I\'ve got a pass in previous interview(->i). This Wednesday is my final i. It is my first time to do English i. I want to talk about my current job. Because interviewer will ask me my current job at coming i. -I think my strength is planning characteristics. This character helps me to meet my project\'s goal. It\'s also helpful for this position. -They asked me \"Why did you apply this position.\" Actually, what I did right now is a little different what I applied. They also asked me \"Are you understanding about the Downstream process?\" -I want to expand my career. I want to explore my career at this field. I want to stack up various experiences. When I was a job seeker. I thought that understanding R&D will be my strengthen.

강사 첨삭

Hi, dear [이름]!
Thank you for sending me your homework. I like your idea regarding this question. I know you can create great things at work, and I hope you will be confident during your interview. Keep fighting, [이름]. Keep up the great work. ^^
~Teacher Erin

Thinking and attitude are the most important thing when we jump to higher business level.
>>Positive thinking and attitude are the most important thing when we jump to a higher business level.
 I have thought that the behaviors are coming from thinking.
>>I have thought that our behavior is a reflection of the way we think.
 So, thinking is the most important in our life even not the business.
>>So, thinking is the most important factor in our life not just in business.
I\'m always trying to think positively.
>>CORRECT
-I\'ve got a pass in previous interview(->i).
>>I passed my previous interview.
 This Wednesday is my final i.
>>CORRECT
 It is my first time to do English i.
>>It is my first time using English.
 I want to talk about my current job.
>>CORRECT
Because interviewer will ask me my current job at coming i.
>>Because the interviewer will ask me about my current job.
-I think my strength is planning characteristics. 
>>I think my strength is being a good planner.
This character helps me to meet my project\'s goal.
>>CORRECT
 It\'s also helpful for this position.
>>CORRECT
-They asked me \"Why did you apply this position.\" 
>>They asked me \"Why did you apply for this position?\"
Actually, what I did right now is a little different what I applied.
>>Actually, what I\'m doing right now is a little different from the position I\'m applying for.
 They also asked me \"Are you understanding about the Downstream process?\"
>>They also asked me \"How much is your understanding of the Downstream process?\"
-I want to expand my career.
>>CORRECT
 I want to explore my career at this field.
>>I want to widen my career in this field.
 I want to stack up various experiences.
>>CORRECT
When I was a job seeker. 
>>CORRECT
I thought that understanding R&D will be my strengthen.
>>I think understanding R&D will be my strength.

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