What one thing do you want to change about yourself?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, honestly, since I was young I have envied a person who have a good physical stamina so that\'s why I try to do various exercises like Pilates, riding a bike and the like.
So, if possible I really want to a strength body instead of weak of that.
I mean I frequently feel exhausted in my daily life.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Being more physically powerful and possessing a stamina like our younger selves are the goals as we grow older. We can never be forever young, thus, doing exercises to preserve our strength is a must.
I am happy for this short and meaningful answer, well done!
-T. Donna =)
>> Well, honestly, since I was young I have envied a person who has a good physical stamina so that\'s why I tried to do various exercises like Pilates, riding a bike and the like.
So, if possible I really want to a strength body instead of weak of that.
>> So, if possible I really want to strengthen my body instead of having a weak one.
I mean I frequently feel exhausted in my daily life.
>> Correct!
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