What other activies can you do in the amusement park?
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First, we can eat in a reasterant.
Second, we can buy some gifts like a doll.
Third, we can do part-time job.
Lastly, we can play many!
These are we can do other activies can we do at the amusement park.
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First, we can eat in a reasterant.
>> First, we can eat in a restaurant.
Second, we can buy some gifts like a doll.
>> Second, we can buy some gifts like dolls.
Third, we can do part-time job.
>> Third, we can do a part-time job.
Lastly, we can play many!
>> Lastly, we can play many games!
These are we can do other activies can we do at the amusement park.
>> These are the activies that we can do in the amusement park.
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