What other animals do you think can help guide blind people?

2018-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Let's think about the time before we did not use a cellphone. We hadn't thought to use a mobile phone until it developed. But dreams came true. I would like to say that everything is possible even though all people insist that something is impossible. We are able to invent whatever we imagine. A lot of doctors are trying to copy human cells and implant it to the patients. Some people were cured by transplanting human cell. What a incredible world!!!

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

What a Monday vibe! You were able to come up with flawless sentences this time. Don\'t hesitate to write all your thoughts, in that way you will gain more strategies in comprehensive writing. Have a great day!

~Teacher Eunice


Let\'s think about the time before we did not use a cellphone.

>> Let\'s think about the time when we still don\'t use a cellphone.
 We hadn\'t thought to use a mobile phone until it developed.

>> We haven\'t thought of using a mobile phone until it was developed. 
But dreams came true.

>> Correct!

>> OR: Dreams do come true.

I would like to say that everything is possible even though all people insist that something is impossible.

>> I would like to say that everything is possible even though all the people insist that everything is impossible.
 We are able to invent whatever we imagine. 

>> Correct!
 A lot of doctors are trying to copy human cells and implant it to the patients.

>> Correct!

>> OR: The doctors are trying to copy human cells and implant it to the patients.

Some people were cured by transplanting human cell.

>> Correct!
 What a incredible world!!!

>> What an incredible world!!!

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