What other companies are you interviewing with?
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As a finance major with a client service background with a large dataset, I am actively seeking a data analytics role within financial services organizations. Since I am very sales-oriented, it would be grateful if I could have an opportunity to confront client and pitch ideas to make business dealings. Although I have interviews with other companies, I can say that I am thrilled about this interview. I believe I could contribute sales skills and customer services experience with a lot of exposure in data analytics within the financial service industry.
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As a finance major with a client service background with a large dataset, I am actively seeking a data analytics role within financial services organizations.
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Since I am very sales-oriented, it would be grateful if I could have an opportunity to confront client and pitch ideas to make business dealings.
>>> OR: Since I am very sales-oriented, it would be great if I could have an opportunity to confront client and pitch ideas to make business dealings.
Although I have interviews with other companies, I can say that I am thrilled about this interview.
>>> correct
I believe I could contribute sales skills and customer services experience with a lot of exposure in data analytics within the financial service industry.
>>> correct
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