What other countries\' cuisines would you like to learn to cook?
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I want to learn Chiness cuisines. When I went to China, had Chiness foods. Chiness foods was very delicious. There are a lot of foods in China. They have a lot of ingredent and various cuisines. I like to eat Chiness foods. But l think that Chiness foods is too hard to make. They use heavy utensils, and the cooking process is complicated. They use big fire. The fire is very scared. It seems like I can\'t control. I will enjoy buying that to eat.
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Ms. [Name]!
I feel the same way! Chinese cuisine is fantasttic! I love their dimsum.
See you in class
Aki~
I want to learn Chiness cuisines.
I want to learn Chiness cuisines.
>> I want to learn Chiness cuisine.
>> I want to learn Asian cuisines.
When I went to China, had Chiness foods.
>> I had Chinese food when I went to China.
Chiness foods was very delicious.
>> Chinese food is very delicious.
>> The Chinese food I had was very delicious.
There are a lot of foods in China.
>>> CORRECT!
They have a lot of ingredent and various cuisines.
>>> They have a lot of ingredients and various dishes.
I like to eat Chiness foods. But l think that Chiness foods is too hard to make.
>>> I like eating Chiness foods but l think they are diffcult to prepare.
They use heavy utensils, and the cooking process is complicated.
>>> CORRECT!
They use big fire. The fire is very scared.
>> They use a big fire and it looks scary.
It seems like I can\'t control. I will enjoy buying that to eat.
>> It seem like I can\'t contriol that so I will just enjoy buying to eat.
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