What other extreme adventures would you like to try?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I was very closing mind. After I retired my mind was c[이름]ged.
If I have a c[이름]ce I never give up,as usually not good enough but atleast tried something.
After then I earned my pride and self-confidence. One day I want to Kilimanjaro MT with my family. My younger son have been there 2times. I want climbing peck the Mt.
God gave to us free will. If I make my goal I can reach that, Not only special person.
Everybody can do it.
Preposition.My son walked into the his office.
My mother found her wallet under the table.
I cooked nice dinner, and then setting on the table.
My daughter be in China until June 7th.
Yesterday we went to church after we watched the movie that was very meaningful movie..
강사 첨삭
>> When I was young, I used to have a closed mind.
After I retired my mind was c[이름]ged.
>> It all c[이름]ged after I retired.
If I have a c[이름]ce I never give up,as usually not good enough but atleast tried something.
If I have a c[이름]ce I never give up,as usually not good enough but atleast tried something.
>> I usually do not give up, it might not be good enough but at least I tried it.
After then I earned my pride and self-confidence.
After then I earned my pride and self-confidence.
>> correct
One day I want to Kilimanjaro MT with my family.
>> There was one time that I went to Mt. Kilimanjaro with my family.
My younger son have been there 2times.
>> My younger son has been there twice.
I want climbing peck the Mt.
>> I climbed up to the peak of the mountain.
God gave to us free will.
>> correct
If I make my goal I can reach that, Not only special person.
>> If I make a goal, I accomplish it. If other people can do it, I can also do it.
Everybody can do it.
Everybody can do it.
>> correct
Preposition
My son walked into the his office.
>> My son walked into his office.
My mother found her wallet under the table.
My mother found her wallet under the table.
>> correct
I cooked nice dinner, and then setting on the table.
I cooked nice dinner, and then setting on the table.
>> I cooked nice dinner and set it on the table.
My daughter be in China until June 7th.
My daughter be in China until June 7th.
>> My daughter will be in China until June 7th.
Yesterday we went to church after we watched the movie that was very meaningful movie.
Yesterday we went to church after we watched the movie that was very meaningful movie.
>> Yesterday we went to the church and then watched a movie that was a very meaningful movie.
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