What other good news would you want to hear this week?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a esophagitis since last month. today, I went to hospital and take an endoscope. I eating to medicine. doctor said, I can\'t eat flour and coffee. so I have a compulsion diet. LOL. next week, I want to hear the disease get well and successful diet. these are my good news.
강사 첨삭
Hello Clara!
Thank you so much for making an effort to do a lot of compositions today! I think you did really well and your ideas were very interesting to read. Keep up the good work and see you later in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
1. I have esophagitis since last month.
>>CORRECT!
2. today, I went to hospital and take an endoscope.
>>Today, I went to the hospital to undergo endoscopy.
3. I eating to medicine.
>>I took some medicine, too.
4. doctor said, I can\'t eat flour and coffee.
>>The doctor said I can\'t eat flour and coffee.
5. so I have a compulsion diet.
>>So, I have a compulsory diet.
6. next week, I want to hear the disease get well and successful diet.
>>By next week, I want to hear that I\'ve recovered from this disease and my diet was successful.
7. these are my good news.
>>CORRECT!
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