What other language do you think must also be widely spoken next to English?

2015-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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China has been surging as a new world power not only in economy, but also in other areas such as culture, language, and tourism. China's population of 1.3 billion renders it the most populous nation on earth, accounting for a fifth of the world's population; while at almost 10 million square kilometers it is the third largest country after Russia and Canada. Economically, it is the world's fourth largest trading nation, having risen from 32nd in 1978 and 10th in 1997. Its GDP at 13% of world output is second to the US. China is also the world's fastest developing economy in the present age, having grown an average of 9.5% annually for the past 20 years. Such high growth rates, low labor costs and a huge emerging market, have attracted the world's highest levels of foreign direct investment.Due to it sudden rise, many people started learning Chinese for the purpose of business and personal interest as well.As a country's power grows, it's language gets stronger as well, which is natural

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!

Thanks for your informative essay.

I also want to learn how to speak in Chinese.
However, when I hear it, it sounds really difficult.

I am so blessed to have a student like you.

I love reading your compositions.

See you in class.
Teacher Nina


China has been surging as a new world power not only in economy, but also in other areas such as culture, language, and tourism.

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China\'s population of 1.3 billion renders it the most populous nation on earth, accounting for a fifth of the world\'s population; while at almost 10 million square kilometers it is the third largest country after Russia and Canada.

>> Better: China\'s population of 1.3 billion renders it the most populous nation on Earth, accounting for the fifth of the world\'s population; while at almost 10 million square kilometers. It is the third largest country after Russia and Canada.

Economically, it is the world\'s fourth largest trading nation, having risen from 32nd in 1978 and 10th in 1997.

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Its GDP at 13% of world output is second to the US.

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China is also the world\'s fastest developing economy in the present age, having grown an average of 9.5% annually for the past 20 years.

>> China is also the world\'s fastest developing economy in the present, having grown an average of 9.5% annually for the past 20 years.

Such high growth rates, low labor costs and a huge emerging market, have attracted the world\'s highest levels of foreign direct investment.

>> correct

Due to it sudden rise, many people started learning Chinese for the purpose of business and personal interest as well.

>> correct

As a country\'s power grows, it\'s language gets stronger as well, which is natural

>> correct

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