What other language do you want to speak?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many different languages in the world.
I used to have a quriousity about those belonged to different cultures. Language can indicate its own culture which means if I learn a certain language, I can understand its culture too.
Regarding this, I want to speak French among many kinds of languages. Because I have desired living in France from when I was young.
If I have a chance to visit France, I will stay at South of France near beach for several months with learning French and enjoy French foods.
강사 첨삭
Happy weekend Young Won!
You really have an impeccable taste of life in general. France is full of sophistication and rich culture. I am sure that you will quickly adapt to the French culture and lifestyle. Perhaps after your stay in Canada, you can be there next.
Thank you for a very well written short essay! See you next time.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
I used to have a quriousity about those belonged to different cultures. Language can indicate its own culture which means if I learn a certain language, I can understand its culture too.
>> I used to have a curiosity about those who belong to the different cultures. Language can indicate its own culture which means if I learn a certain language, I can understand its culture too.
Regarding this, I want to speak French among many kinds of languages. Because I have desired living in France from when I was young.
>> Regarding/(With) this, I want to speak French among the many kinds of languages. I have desired to live in France when I was young.
If I have a chance to visit France, I will stay at South of France near beach for several months with learning French and enjoy French foods.
If I have a chance to visit France, I will stay at South of France near beach for several months with learning French and enjoy French foods.
>> If I have a chance to visit France, I will stay at Southern France near the beach for several months while learning French and enjoying French foods.
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