What other languages do I want to learn?

2019-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

I am not good at english yet. So I do not want to learn other language. Now I only want to learn english. If I can speak english well, I might wonder another languages.

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]!^^

Thank you for reading your evaluations and completing your homework once again. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on our previous lesson about languages. But I like seeing your desire to learn English and maybe, if you\'ve mastered the language, try learning another one. Let\'s discuss it more in class. See you ~ t. Jane

Here are the corrections:

What other languages do I want to learn?

>>> CORRECT =)

I am not good at english yet.
>>> I am not good in English yet.

So I do not want to learn other language.
>>> So I do not want to learn other languages.

Now I only want to learn english.
>>> For now, I only want to learn English.

If I can speak english well, I might wonder another languages.

>>> If I can speak English well, I might think about learning other languages.

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