What other languages do you want to learn aside from English?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to learn German because I like how it sounds. I learned it a little with an app but I quit it after one month of learning. After learning German, I want to travel there.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing your thoughts. take note of this: A different language is a different vision of life.\"-Federico Fellini
May you always have fun learning!
T. Aki~
I want to learn German because I like how it sounds.
>> CORRECT!
I learned it a little with an app but I quit it after one month of learning.
>> CORRECT!
After learning German, I want to travel there.
>> CORRECT!
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