What other opportunities are you looking forward to in the future? What are your plans to achieve yo
학생이 쓴 원문
An opportunity that I\'m looking forward is to get married with a wife in far future. Also, making my own house too. In order to achieve those, I have to make a lot of money.
강사 첨삭
Short but sweet! Nicely done, Elic. You were able to talk about what you are looking forward to in the future. It\'s good that you have a goal in everything that you do, these goals will help you stay motivated to do your best. I placed some alternative sentences here, especially in the 2nd item, and had some corrections for the first one. Overall, you did amazing. Thank you, Elic!
- Teacher Raven :)
>> An opportunity that I\'m looking forward to is to get married in the future.
Also, making my own house too.
>> Correct. OR Also, I would like to have my own house.
In order to achieve those, I have to make a lot of money.
>> Correct.
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