What other places would you like to visit aside from Australia?
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Thank you for this question. Actually I have lots of hoping plan with it. I have big interesting about learning language. I would become 35, and if I would have more money and relaxed, I hope go to lots of country. I want to live in each country for 1 year. The country I have in mind are Japan, Prance, Germany etc. I want to live in each country and experience its culture. This may that broaden my horizons about world. I want to go Philippine too, possible. I want to learn Tagalog language too!
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Good day, Da [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Thank you for this question.
>> CORRECT!Actually I have lots of hoping plan with it.
>> CORRECT!I have big interesting about learning language.
>> I have a big interest in learning a language.
I would become 35, and if I would have more money and relaxed, I hope go to lots of country.
>> If I would turn 35, and if I would have more money and relaxed, I hope to go to many countries.
I want to live in each country for 1 year.
>> CORRECT!The country I have in mind are Japan, Prance, Germany etc.
>> The countries I have in mind are Japan, France, Germany, etc.
I want to live in each country and experience its culture.
>> CORRECT!This may that broaden my horizons about world.
>> This may broaden my horizons about the world.
I want to go Philippine too, possible.
>> I want to go to the Philippines too, if possible.
I want to learn Tagalog language too!
>> CORRECT!
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