What outdoor activities do you like to do during autumn?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like looking at the Han River without thinking about anything. and i like walking at a park or participating a flower festival.
강사 첨삭
Hi! I\'m so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I like looking at the Han River without thinking about anything. and i like walking at a park or participating a flower festival.
>> I like looking at the Han River without thinking about anything, and I enjoy walking in a park or participating in a flower festival.
OR >> I enjoy gazing at the Han River, letting my mind clear, and I also like taking walks in parks or attending flower festivals.
>> I like looking at the Han River without thinking about anything, and I enjoy walking in a park or participating in a flower festival.
OR >> I enjoy gazing at the Han River, letting my mind clear, and I also like taking walks in parks or attending flower festivals.
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