What outdoor activities do you like to do during autumn?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like walking on the street with colorful trees in autumn.
In autumn, leafs color of tree are changed from green to yellow or red.
I go out to enjoy this scenary.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I like walking on the street with colorful trees in autumn.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I enjoy walking on the street surrounded by colorful trees in autumn.
In autumn, leafs color of tree are changed from green to yellow or red.
>> In this season, the leaves change color from green to yellow or red.
I go out to enjoy this scenary.
>> I go out to enjoy this beautiful scenery.
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