What outdoor activities would you like to try soon?
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As you know, it\'s spring. I couldn\'t ride a bicycle, because it was cold weather. I will ride a bike along HAN RIVER. All gym and sports club closed for long lime as epidemic, most member couldn\'t enjoy activity at their club. I am also a member at close gym, I would like to restart exercise at early morning before going office. I used to go the gym at 5:50 a.m. But I cannot go there as get up lately from bed.
I have been swam for more than 10 years. There is a good swimming pool close to my village. it was built at Seoul Olympic game at 1988. I like to swim at my free time. I can meet a beautiful girl with a short swimming cloth.
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As you know, it\'s spring.
>> CORRECT!
I couldn\'t ride a bicycle, because it was cold weather.
>> I couldn\'t ride a bicycle, because the weather is cold.
I will ride a bike along HAN RIVER.
>> CORRECT!
All gym and sports club closed for long lime as epidemic, most member couldn\'t enjoy activity at their club.
>> All gym and sports club closed for long time because of the pandemic, most members couldn\'t enjoy some activities in the club.
I am also a member at close gym, I would like to restart exercise at early morning before going office.
>> I am also a member at a close gym, and I would like to start exercising again at early morning before going to the office.
I used to go the gym at 5:50 a.m. But I cannot go there as get up lately from bed.
>> I used to go to the gym at 5:50 AM, but I cannot go there because I get up late from bed.
I have been swam for more than 10 years.
>> I have been swimming for more than 10 years.
There is a good swimming pool close to my village.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There is a good resort near my village.
it was built at Seoul Olympic game at 1988.
>> It was built at Seoul Olympic game in 1988.
I like to swim at my free time.
>> CORRECT!
I can meet a beautiful girl with a short swimming cloth.
>> CORRECT!
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