What outfit do you think is comfortable and safe for people who exercise?Nowadays, there are various

2020-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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There are various functional outfits in order to help increase their physical performances. For example, a coverall swimsuit made of special cloth having less friction ratio in the water than a human’s skin. Finally, this has been banned in any official swim competition. Because all players could get highly improved records when they wore it. I’m not the kind of a player to be faster or to be stronger than any one, so simple cloths, well absorbing sweet and not disturbing physical actions, are enough for me. In a gym, most people just wear short sleeve T-shirts and trousers like me. However, there was one small accident while I jogged last year. I thought that whatever I wore, this wouldn’t be harmful, so I wore normal shoes like the above picture. At the middle of running, I missed a step and had a fracture on my left foot. I thought this wasn’t a big deal, but I had to keep plaster on it for 2 months. If I had worn proper running shoes the injury would have been much lighter.

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Thank you [이름]!
~Lucy

There are various functional outfits in order to help increase their physical performances. 
>>CORRECT!
For example, a coverall swimsuit made of special cloth having less friction ratio in the water than a human’s skin.
>>CORRECT!
 Finally, this has been banned in any official swim competition. 
>>CORRECT!
Because all players could get highly improved records when they wore it.
>>CORRECT!
I’m not the kind of a player to be faster or to be stronger than any one, so simple cloths, well absorbing sweet and not disturbing physical actions, are enough for me.
>>CORRECT!
 In a gym, most people just wear short sleeve T-shirts and trousers like me.
>>CORRECT!
However, there was one small accident while I jogged last year. 
>>CORRECT!
I thought that whatever I wore, this wouldn’t be harmful, so I wore normal shoes like the above picture. 
>>CORRECT!
At the middle of running, I missed a step and had a fracture on my left foot.
>>CORRECT!
 I thought this wasn’t a big deal, but I had to keep plaster on it for 2 months.
>>CORRECT!
 If I had worn proper running shoes the injury would have been much lighter.
>>CORRECT!

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