What part does alcohol play in your country's culture? play in your country's culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many alcohol plays in our country. Also there are many kinds of toast in our country. Actually I didn't experience alcohol game but when I become adult I want to play alcohol games with my friends.
강사 첨삭
There are many alcohol plays in our country. Also there are many kinds of toast in our country. Actually I didn\'t experience alcohol game but when I become adult I want to play alcohol games with my friends.
There are many kinds of alcohol plays in our country, there are also many kinds of toasts but I haven\'t experienced alcohol game but when I become an adult I want to try it with my friends.
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