What part does luck play in success?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, most of the part depends on luck in success. Although one has excellent intellect or talent, it also belongs to luck. Therefore, I\'m not a fatalist, but almost everything require luck, especially success, exam pass, etc. So, you do not have to be too discouraged. Everyone has their own luck regardless of our will or mind. But what we should not forget is our effort! It is also one of the most influential causes of success. I think probably luck comes if our effort is at least 1%, not zero.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]~
I would like to share my opinion as well, as Christians we don\'t believe in luck. ^___^ Luck, somehow implies that success may depend more on chance than on merit or effort.
Chammy
In my opinion, most of the part depends on luck in success.
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>> I believe, most events depend on luck to succeed.
Although one has excellent intellect or talent, it also belongs to luck.
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>> Despite one\'s excellence or talent, it still relies on luck.
Therefore, I\'m not a fatalist, but almost everything require luck, especially success, exam pass, etc.
>>Therefore, I\'m not a fatalist, but almost everything requires luck, especially success or passing an exam, etc.
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>> I\'m not a fatalist, but practically everything depends on luck, particularly if you want to succeed or pass an exam, etc.
So, you do not have to be too discouraged.
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>>Therefore, you shouldn\'t be overly demotivated.
Everyone has their own luck regardless of our will or mind.
>> Everyone has their own luck regardless of their will or mind.
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>> We have our own luck, no matter what our desires or thoughts are.
But what we should not forget is our effort!
>> But we should not forget the effort!
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>> Regardless, we must always exert effort.
It is also one of the most influential causes of success.
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>> It is also among the most important factors that contribute to success.
I think probably luck comes if our effort is at least 1%, not zero.
>> I think luck will probably come if our effort is at least 1%, not zero.
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