What part of Chuseok do you think is most important to keep for the future?
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i think most important part of Chuseok for the future are two things.
the first is very important. first, Chuseok should be keep maintain for holiday.
one of the Chuseok\'s holiday is very long days of korea holiday.
so many people are wait Chuseok\'s holiday.
second is same as the first things, but any different.
second, Chuseok\'s bonus wages must wiil be keep maintain.
most corporations exist \'Chuseok\'s bonus\'.
i think Chuseok\'s bonus are not bad amount.
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Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with you! Maintaining Chuseok as a long holiday, together with providing bonuses, can help people truly enjoy the holiday and look forward to it every year. Maintaining these traditions can allow people to celebrate this day and not disregard it.
- T. Caitlyn
i think most important part of Chuseok for the future are two things.
>> I think the most important parts of Chuseok for the future are two things.
the first is very important.
the first is very important.
>> The first one is very important.
first, Chuseok should be keep maintain for holiday.
>> First, Chuseok should be kept and maintained as a holiday.
one of the Chuseok\'s holiday is very long days of korea holiday.
one of the Chuseok\'s holiday is very long days of korea holiday.
>> Chuseok is one of the longest holidays in Korea.
so many people are wait Chuseok\'s holiday.
so many people are wait Chuseok\'s holiday.
>> So many people wait for the Chuseok holiday.
second is same as the first things, but any different.
second is same as the first things, but any different.
>> The second is similar to the first one, but slightly different.
second, Chuseok\'s bonus wages must wiil be keep maintain.
second, Chuseok\'s bonus wages must wiil be keep maintain.
>> Second, Chuseok bonus wages must be kept and maintained.
most corporations exist \'Chuseok\'s bonus\'.
most corporations exist \'Chuseok\'s bonus\'.
>> Most corporations provide a \"Chuseok bonus.\"
i think Chuseok\'s bonus are not bad amount.
i think Chuseok\'s bonus are not bad amount.
>> I think the Chuseok bonus is a good amount.
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