What part of Korean tradition are you most proud of?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I\'m most proud of the traditional Korean costume part.
Representatively, it is a costume like Hanbok, but it is good to express it differently by incorporating modern parts.
Also, I\'m proud to preserve traditional heritage well, but I think I\'m more interested in costumes because my current interest is in style or design.
강사 첨삭
I hope this finds you well, [이름]!^^
I saw many Filipinos traveling to Korea and tried wearing your traditional clothes, hanbok. And I find it interesting to wear one day... I hope that that time will come when I can also experience the things I used to see even in Kdrama.. Hehehe~
-Chammy
I think I\'m most proud of the traditional Korean costume part.Representatively, it is a costume like Hanbok, but it is good to express it differently by incorporating modern parts.
Also, I\'m proud to preserve traditional heritage well, but I think I\'m more interested in costumes because my current interest is in style or design.
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