What part of parenting do you think is the hardest?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear, Teacher Beth
I really wanted to write you a letter, since I\'ve been whining about how hard parenting was during the last couple of lessons. Of course parenting was not easy at the first time, but sooner or later mothers can get used to parenting mostly. So I don\'t want you to be too afraid of having a child in the future or misinformed badly because of my experience. Babys are sooo cute!! Parents feel happier than ever.
However, it\'s ture that pareting definitely takes a lot of time, which is the hardest part in my point of view. I couldn\'t have much time for myself. It wasn\'t easy for me to write even a short essay or letter to you although I\'ve really wanted to write and study English more. Might be an excuse for myself. Anyways the 10 mintue class with you was like a ventilation time of my recent parenthood life. I really appreciate it. Have a great weekend. Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. Parenting is never an easy task, but they say it is all worth it. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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Of course parenting was not easy at the first time, but sooner or later mothers can get used to parenting mostly.
>>> OR: Of course parenting was not easy at first, but sooner or later mothers can get used to parenting mostly.
So I don\'t want you to be too afraid of having a child in the future or misinformed badly because of my experience.
>>> So I don\'t want you to be too afraid of having a child in the future or be misinformed badly because of my experience.
Babys are sooo cute!! Parents feel happier than ever.
>>> correct
However, it\'s ture that pareting definitely takes a lot of time, which is the hardest part in my point of view.
However, it\'s ture that pareting definitely takes a lot of time, which is the hardest part in my point of view.
>>> However, it\'s true that parenting definitely takes a lot of time, which is the hardest part in my point of view.
I couldn\'t have much time for myself.
>>> correct
It wasn\'t easy for me to write even a short essay or letter to you although I\'ve really wanted to write and study English more.
>>> correct
Might be an excuse for myself.
>>> correct
Anyways the 10 mintue class with you was like a ventilation time of my recent parenthood life.
>>> Anyways, the 10 minute class with you was like a ventilation time of my recent parenthood life.
I really appreciate it.
>>> correct
Have a great weekend. Bye
>>> correct
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