What part of the concert will bring you disappointed?
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When i went concert to the first time, there\'s around mood is so good, but i can see the uncomfortable seat.
Even if concert time too long about over the two hours. i don\'t understand this situation.
강사 첨삭
Hi Dan!
Thank you for submitting your homework. As you can see, I made some suggestions to improve your English and make it sound better. Keep learning and practicing :)
T. Aki~
When i went concert to the first time, there\'s around mood is so good, but i can see the uncomfortable seat.
>>> The first time I went to a concert, there was a good mood but I couldn\'t see any comfortable seats.
>>> I was in a good mood the first time I went to a concert though we were in an uncomfortable area
Even if concert time too long about over the two hours. i don\'t understand this situation.
>>> And the concert lasted over two hours. I don\'t understand this situation.
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