What part of your country would you ideally like to live in?

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Here are my corrections for you:

If I can live in other country, I would like to live in U.K. Because I heard that U.K. is the nice country. 

>> If I can live in another country, I would like to live in the U.K. because I heard that the U.K. is a nice country. 

Also I heard that they are good at keeping traffic. 

>> Also, I heard that they are good at keeping traffic at bay. 

I like it, because in Korea, I saw many people do not keep the traffic. And there is often traffic paralysis, so sometimes I late for school because of it. 

>> I like this because in Korea, I see many people do not keep the traffic moving and there is often a traffic paralysis, so sometimes I am late for school because of it. 

And second thing that I like to live in U.K. is that it is not humid there. 

>> Another thing that I like if I were to live in U.K. is that it is not humid there. 

I am very discomfort of humid weather.

>> I am very uncomfortable in humid weather.