What part of your history would you like to re-live today?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to re-live when I went to the Vietnam last year.
강사 첨삭
Good job! ~~
Please tell me more about your vacation in Vietnam on our next class. ^^
In your sentence, you can remove \"the\" from the Vietnam.
Teacher will explain why in our next class. ^^
~t. Ally
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I would like to re-live when I went to the Vietnam last year.
>> I would like to re-live the time when I went to Vietnam last year.
>> I would like to re-live the time when I went to Vietnam last year.
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