What part of your trip with your mom did you enjoy the most?
학생이 쓴 원문
The best part of my trip with mom is eating, talking,taking a walk and laughing together.
I was happy when my mom enjoyed the ocean and ate crab.
Travel means precious time with family.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane!
It is such a lovely feeling to see you with your mother having a vacation. I think that is so sweet. The truth is, time flies like an arrow and when you get the time, spend sometime with her more often.
Congratulations for getting all of your sentences correctly. I really appreciate your effort in learning and doing your best in all tasks.
See you again in class.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
I was happy when my mom enjoyed the ocean and ate crab.
Travel means precious time with family.
Or: The best part of my trip with Mom is eating, talking, taking a walk and laughing together.
I was happy when my mom enjoyed the ocean and ate crab.
>> Correct!
Travel means precious time with family.
>> Correct!
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