What percentage of people do you think gamble?

2019-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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In my guess, it would be 0.1 percent or less. I mean, the number of people who doing gamble seriously. Gamble can arouse addiction, so some people can not find another way to get out of this charming poison. And when I think about surrounding of me, nobody do the thing. But if I consider it less strictly, the percentage will be more. There are light version of gambling like sports toto and lottery. I think this two things are kind of gambling as well. In compare to real gamble, there are some acquaintances who do it sometimes.

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Hi Su ^^


Thank you for doing your composition again :)


T. Lainey <\",)))><


In my guess, it would be 0.1 percent or less.

>>> I am guessing it would be 0.1 percent or less.


 I mean, the number of people who doing gamble seriously.

>>> I mean, the number of people gambling seriously.


 Gamble can arouse addiction, so some people can not find another way to get out of this charming poison.

>>> correct


 And when I think about surrounding of me, nobody do the thing.

>>> And when I think about it, nobody does anything.


 But if I consider it less strictly, the percentage will be more.

>>> correct


There are light version of gambling like sports toto and lottery.

>>> correct


 I think this two things are kind of gambling as well.

>>> I think these games are still gambling.


 In compare to real gamble, there are some acquaintances who do it sometimes.

>>> Comparing it to real gambling, there are some acquaintances who still do it sometimes.

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