What percentage of people do you think gamble?
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In my guess, it would be 0.1 percent or less.
>>> I am guessing it would be 0.1 percent or less.
I mean, the number of people who doing gamble seriously.
>>> I mean, the number of people gambling seriously.
Gamble can arouse addiction, so some people can not find another way to get out of this charming poison.
>>> correct
And when I think about surrounding of me, nobody do the thing.
>>> And when I think about it, nobody does anything.
But if I consider it less strictly, the percentage will be more.
>>> correct
There are light version of gambling like sports toto and lottery.
>>> correct
I think this two things are kind of gambling as well.
>>> I think these games are still gambling.
In compare to real gamble, there are some acquaintances who do it sometimes.
>>> Comparing it to real gambling, there are some acquaintances who still do it sometimes.
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