What period of history interests you most and why?

I'm most interested in the period when Pyramid was built. Let's say that I could go to that period by taking a time-machine. First, I'd like to know how Pyramid was built 3,000 years ago. It is unbelievable that the people at that time contructed such a enormous structure because we expect that they didn't have well-developed scientific knowledges about making Pyramid. In addition, I'm also very curious how Egytian people made a communication with each other. They used a hierglyph when they inscribed something about the personal history on their coffins. It should be really interesting to hear how the hierglyph was pronounced at that time. Lastly, What makes me interested in that period is Parao. He was regarded as a strong leader under the protection of the God(Irisis). I want to see him to confirm that he was decorated with a lot of golden accessaries and had a brilliant looking. I hope that I would have a chance to go to old Egypt by time-machine in the future.

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