What period of history would you like to go back and live in? Why?

2021-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I want to go back when I was a elementary school student. Because I was very happy that period. And I want to change my life. For example, I will study English and math more.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! :)

There are some people who are curious about what it was like to live in our world before. Everything was totally different. But for me, I think not many people would be willing to go back more than a few decades.

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I want to go back when I was a elementary school student. Because I was very happy that period.

>> I want to go back when I was an elementary school student because I was very happy that time.

And I want to change my life.

>> I also want to change my life if possible.

For example, I will study English and math more.

>> For example, I will study English and Math more.

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