What personality quality do you think is most important in a good friend? Explain why.
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Pesonally, I think active personality is most important in a good friend.
>> Personally, I think an active personality is most important in a good friend.
There are two reasons to support my opinion.
>> Correct.
OR:
>> There are two reasons to support my answer.
The first reason is that I am an active person.
>> Correct.
If my friend likeS to work out, we can do that together such as badminton and table tennis.
>> If my friends like to work out and play badminton or table tennis, we can do those activities together.
>> My friends and I can work out and play badminton or table tennis together.
The second reason is that we could share our opinions and perspective honestly.
>> Correct.
I prefer to talk with my friend natually and easily since we can understand each other well.
>> I prefer to talk with my friend naturally/casually and easily since we can understand each other well.
As a result, my most important tining im a good friend is active personality.
>> Because of those matters, I think that an active personality is the most important quality in a good friend.
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