What personality quality do you think is most important in a good friend? Explain why.

2017-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Pesonally, I think active personality is most important in a good friend. There are two reasons to support my opinion. The first reason is that I am an active person. If my friend likeS to work out, we can do that together such as badminton and table tennis. The second reason is that we could share our opinions and perspective honestly. I prefer to talk with my friend natually and easily since we can understand each other well. As a result, my most important tining im a good friend is active personality.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!^^

Thank you for sharing your opinion about our essay. I am pretty sure that your friends have this kind of personality because you jibe well with them.^^

Have a great day ahead!^^

~Kelly^^

Pesonally, I think active personality is most important in a good friend.

>> Personally, I think an active personality is most important in a good friend.

There are two reasons to support my opinion.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> There are two reasons to support my answer.
The first reason is that I am an active person.

>> Correct.

If my friend likeS to work out, we can do that together such as badminton and table tennis.

>> If my friends like to work out and play badminton or table tennis, we can do those activities together.

>> My friends and I can work out and play badminton or table tennis together.
The second reason is that we could share our opinions and perspective honestly.

>> Correct.

I prefer to talk with my friend natually and easily since we can understand each other well. 

>> I prefer to talk with my friend naturally/casually and easily since we can understand each other well.  
 As a result, my most important tining im a good friend is active personality.

>> Because of those matters, I think that an active personality is the most important quality in a good friend.

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