What personality trait is the most important for inner beauty?

2019-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Inner beauty means what personality person have and it doesn\'t define exactly. It refers to being nice, gentle or humorous to others. Actually, we can\'t judge if one have a nice personality because many people pretend to being gentle in order to achieve their goals. It usually takes a long time to know what kind of personality a person has. Some people would like to meet someone who is humorous, the others prefer to have a relation with gentle people. Additionally, every person has a specific character we all have a different perspective of judging people. In my case, I think that being optimistic, having positive mind and being active on all situation is the most important traits for inner beauty. If someone has a personality that I mentioned above, they would be treated well and were considered as a nice person, even though he/she doesn\'t look handsome or beautiful. I have seen a article which showed that better looking people tend to judged by others as more intelligent. th

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing your opinions [이름]. A lot people always consider the outer beauty at first.

But we always realize how important inner beauty is. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Inner beauty means what personality person have and it doesn\'t define exactly.

>> Inner beauty means the personality of a person it doesn\'t have accurate definition.

It refers to being nice, gentle or humorous to others. 

>> CORRECT
Actually, we can\'t judge if one have a nice personality because many people pretend to being gentle in order to achieve their goals. 

>>  Actually, we can\'t judge if a person is being kind because many people pretend to be humble in order to achieve their goals. 
It usually takes a long time to know what kind of personality a person has.

>> CORRECT

Some people would like to meet someone who is humorous, the others prefer to have a relation with gentle people.

>> Some people like to meet someone who is humorous, others prefer to have a relationship with gentle people.

Additionally, every person has a specific character we all have a different perspective of judging people.

>> Additionally, every person has a specific character. We all have different views when judging people.

In my case, I think that being optimistic, having positive mind and being active on all situation is the most important traits for inner beauty.

>> In my case, I think that being optimistic and being active in all situations are the most important traits for inner beauty.

If someone has a personality that I mentioned above, they would be treated well and were considered as a nice person, even though he/she doesn\'t look handsome or beautiful.

>> If someone has a personality that I mentioned above, they should be treated well and will be considered as a nice person, no matter how he/she looks.

I have seen a article which showed that better looking people tend to judged by others as more intelligent.

>> I have seen an article which showed that better looking people tend to judged by others as more intelligent.

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