What personality trait would you like to develop and why?
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I\'d like to develop the sociability of my personality traits. When I meet with someone for a first time, I feel shy and it takes me a while to get along with other people. So I wanna that.
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Hi Elic!
We\'re the same. We really need to work on this. ^^ hahaha!
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon
>> I\'d like to develop my socializing skills.
When I meet with someone for a first time, I feel shy and it takes me a while to get along with other people.
>> When I meet with someone for the first time, I feel shy and it takes me a while to get along with other people.
So I wanna that.
>> This is why I want that.
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