What personality traits do you consider important in a good friend / a boss / a partner?
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Before answering a question, I want to let you know that I really hate someone who says curse words a lot. I think it makes me uncomfortable and then I guess it looks pity for him/her. In addiction that, I think it\'s critical to get me comfortable with someone. Hahaha
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Wonderful day to you, Elic! A little progress each day adds up to big results. Always believe in yourself. I appreciate your hard work.
Before answering a question, I want to let you know that I really hate someone who says curse words a lot.
>> Before answering your question, I want you to know that I really hate someone who says a lot of curse words.
I think it makes me uncomfortable and then I guess it looks pity for him/her.
>> I think it makes me uncomfortable and it makes me pity him/her.
In addiction that, I think it\'s critical to get me comfortable with someone. Hahaha
>> In addition to that, I think it\'s kind of hard for me to get comfortable with that kind of person.
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