What pet do you have at home?
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I have been keeping two turtles at home. One is named Lucky the other is named Looky. I don’t remember exactly but Lucky came my home about seven years ago and Looky came my home three years later. Looky was a baby so very smaller than Lucky and cute when it comes home but now they look almost same. I guess they are about fifteen cm. I don’t know the reason but I like Lucky more than Looky.
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I have been keeping two turtles at home. One is named Lucky the other is named Looky. I don’t remember exactly but Lucky came my home about seven years ago and Looky came my home three years later. Looky was a baby so very smaller than Lucky and cute when it comes home but now they look almost same. I guess they are about fifteen cm. I don’t know the reason but I like Lucky more than Looky.
>> I have been keeping two turtles at home. One is named Lucky the other is named Looky. I don’t remember exactly but Lucky came to my home about seven years ago and Looky came to my home three years later. Looky was a baby, smaller and cutier than Lucky when I first saw them but now they look almost the same. I guess they are about fifteen cm. I don’t know the reason but I like Lucky more than Looky.
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