What phobias do you have and how do you think can you overcome it?
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I have trypanophobia, acrophobia, ranidaphobia and bufonophobia.
I think these phobias came from traumas in my life experience.
To overcome, I will have to try having good experience of these matters and recognize that it is safe and not dangerous.
However it will be very hard to get over and much harder when it is actually dangerous.
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I think these phobias came from traumas in my life experience.
However it will be very hard to get over and much harder when it is actually dangerous.
I have trypanophobia, acrophobia, ranidaphobia and bufonophobia.
>> I have Trypanophobia, Acrophobia, Ranidaphobia and Bufonophobia...
I think these phobias came from traumas in my life experience.
>> I think these phobias came from traumas in my life experiences.
To overcome, I will have to try having good experience of these matters and recognize that it is safe and not dangerous.
>> To overcome, I will have to try having good experiences of these matters and recognize that it is safe and not dangerous.
However it will be very hard to get over and much harder when it is actually dangerous.
>> However, it will be very hard to get over and much harder when it is actually dangerous
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