What pieces of advice can you give me if I get married?

2020-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name], I think, if you decide to marry with your honey, it would be a good decision. Regarding marriage, so many person give some advice to bride or bridegroom. but, most important thing is a belief each other. You will have a crisis with your honey after marriage. How do you solve this problem? You will live 50 years after marriage with your wife. I think, are you and your wife always happy? As like fighting with your younger brother, you will meet like this situation. At that time, your behavor is very important. even if your wife\'s saying is not abnormal, you have to accept her right now. So, if your wife have some time, maybe, she will say\" I am sorry at that time. I wanted you to belive it that I said. If your wife angry to you, you accept her if possible. If you believe her, she feel your love forever.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], thank you for doing your homework. Please continue the good work. Keep it up.

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],

I think, if you decide to marry with your honey, it would be a good decision.
>> I think, if you decided to marry your girlfriend, it would be a good decision.

Regarding marriage, so many person give some advice to bride or bridegroom.
>> Regarding marriage, many people give pieces of advice for both the bride and the groom.

but, most important thing is a belief each other.
>> But, the most important thing is to believe each other.

You will have a crisis with your honey after marriage.
>> You will have a lot of crisis with your partner after marriage.

How do you solve this problem?
>> CORRECT

You will live 50 years after marriage with your wife.
I think, are you and your wife always happy?
>> Do you think after 50 years of marriage, you will still be happy with your wife?

As like fighting with your younger brother, you will meet like this situation.
>> Just like fighting with your siblings, you will also have this kind of situations with your spouse.

At that time, your behavor is very important. even if your wife\'s saying is not abnormal, you have to accept her right now.
>> At those times, your behavior is very important even if your wife is saying nonsense, you have to accept her.

So, if your wife have some time, maybe, she will say\" I am sorry at that time. I wanted you to belive it that I said.
>> There will be a time when your wife will sincerely apologize for those times.

If your wife angry to you, you accept her if possible.
>> If your wife is angry at you, you have to understand her as much as possible.

If you believe her, she feel your love forever.
>> If you believe in her, she will feel your love forever.

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