What place in your country would you recommend foreign people travel to?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'d like to introduce Gyeongbokgung and the night view of Seoul to foreigners.
Gyeongbokgung Palace is showed well Korea\'s past.
I believe the night view of Seoul is even more beautiful than that of other countries.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [Name]. Have a great day ahead!
I\'d like to introduce Gyeongbokgung and the night view of Seoul to foreigners.
>>> correct
Gyeongbokgung Palace is showed well Korea\'s past.
Gyeongbokgung Palace is showed well Korea\'s past.
>>> Gyeongbokgung Palace greatly embodies Korea\'s past.
>>> OR: Gyeongbokgung Palace gives a good image or impression of Korea\'s past.
I believe the night view of Seoul is even more beautiful than that of other countries.
I believe the night view of Seoul is even more beautiful than that of other countries.
>>> correct
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