What places do you want to visit someday?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to visit places is Finland because Santa is in the Finland Sant village.
So I want to go to the Finland in December.
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Here\'s your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
What places do you want to visit someday?
I want to visit places is Finland because Santa is in the Finland Sant village.
>>> The place I want to visit is Finland because Santa lives in Santa Claus Village.
So I want to go to the Finland in December.
>>> That’s why I want to go there in December.
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